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Michigan Home Girl, DNP Nurse Anesthesia

  • Writer: NursingStatement.com
    NursingStatement.com
  • Apr 2, 2021
  • 3 min read

Updated: Sep 14


Nurse in blue scrubs adjusts ventilator for a patient in a hospital room, monitoring vital signs on a screen. Calm, focused atmosphere.
A dedicated DNP Nurse Anesthetist from Michigan attentively monitors a patient's vital signs during a hospital procedure.

Born and raised in ____, Michigan, I still live here because I am a ‘homegirl.’ Michigan DNA is very much part of my identity, and for years now, I have watched with horror the decline of our flagship city, Detroit. Thus, I am incredibly proud that the University of ____ is one of the most exemplary Nurse Anesthesia programs in the country, with people seeking to move to Detroit to have the profound privilege of attending your program. I see ____ as an oasis in the middle of a storm, a source of hope for the underserved who often find themselves locked out in the cold without access to medical care. Thus, ____ is my first choice among Programs in Nurse Anesthesia.


Staying fit is also a big part of my positive identity development. For some time now, I have been volunteering at a fitness camp as a personal trainer, helping others achieve their goal of a healthy lifestyle. I have worked as a nurse for the past ten years and have eight years of experience in emergency and acute care settings. I served in a 32-bed ER that sees 50,000 patients a year. Since July 2016, I have worked in our critical care environment in a busy 30-bed unit, mostly floating between our neuro-intensive care NICU and cardiovascular care CICU units.


Doctors in surgical attire operate in a high-tech hospital room with monitors displaying colorful medical images, focusing on patient care.
In a high-tech operating room, a team of skilled medical professionals, including a DNP nurse anesthetist, closely monitors vital signs and neurological scans during a critical procedure.

Most of my patients are recovering from open-heart surgery. Floating between all three units – General ICU, Cardio, and Neuro has dramatically enhanced the scope of my critical care experience, providing me with an advanced understanding of many acute health challenges. One of the CRNAs I have shadowed at my hospital graduated from ____ and had nothing but glowing praise for your program every time the subject came up. One of the cardiothoracic surgeons I support regularly also lauds your Nurse Anesthesia Program. I want to help people in my home state. Thus, for me, ____ is the ideal choice so that I learn about specific challenges and opportunities of service here in Michigan as a state-wide community. This is especially relevant as state resources become increasingly crucial without federal support for health care. I want to learn about the healthcare challenges our residents face in the part of our state in greatest need: Detroit.


Futuristic lab with glowing heart models in glass cases, doctors in scrubs, medical monitors around, creating a sci-fi medical atmosphere.
A futuristic medical lab featuring advanced heart simulators surrounded by healthcare professionals, highlighting innovations in nurse anesthesia.

I have always dreamed of becoming a CRNA and even authored a paper on the profession as a senior in high school; 16 years later, I still have the dream. My inspiration closest to home was my aunt, who rose through the ranks as a nurse to the position of Director of a nursing facility. I focus on providing the best holistic care possible for the patient. I am also attracted to the autonomy of being an advanced practice nurse.


My mother died at 36, she died. It was ruled as unexpected cardiac death. I also seek to make her proud. I have now closely observed CRNAs in various emergency and intensive care settings. I admire three things in particular: their compassion, vigilance, and how they so naturally and nobly serve as an advocate for the patient. I am a detail-oriented perfectionist – I see Nurse Anesthesia as my natural calling. I enjoy caring for one patient at a time.


Thank you for considering my application to Nurse Anesthesia at ____.



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Anne M. Witherspoon
5 days ago
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

This personal statement is a heartfelt, community-rooted, and clinically grounded narrative that reflects a nurse whose passion for service, personal resilience, and professional excellence make her an ideal candidate for a Nurse Anesthesia program. The author presents a compelling case for admission, blending deep Michigan pride, critical care expertise, and a long-standing dream of becoming a CRNA. The author’s identity as a “homegirl” and her emotional investment in Detroit’s challenges reflect a powerful sense of place and purpose. Her desire to serve the underserved in Michigan, especially in Detroit, aligns beautifully with the mission of nurse anesthesia and community health. With ten years in nursing and eight years in emergency and acute care—including floating between NICU, CICU, and general ICU—the…

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