NursingStatement.com by Dr. Robert Edinger
Personal Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing Service
Skype ID: DrRobertEdinger
(USA) 1-812-675-4937
The samples posted on this web site are anonymous and always more than two years old at the time of posting.
If you are thinking about using my service but are not yet convinced, I invite you to send your rough draft to my email, drrobertedinger@gmail.com, so that I can edit and enhance your first paragraph at no charge or obligation. Most of my potential clients who receive the first paragraph, go on to commission me to work on the entire statement.
Applicants to Nursing School from Military Backgrounds and/or with Military-related, Professional Interests
Bachelor's Master's, Doctorate, Certificate Program, Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing, Letters of Recommendation, Free Professional, Anonymous Samples
Sample 1st Paragraph, US Military Nurse
My last 8 years have been spent in the United States Army serving as a Respiratory Therapist. During my time serving my country I abandoned my original course of study in business and earned my BSN because I came to deeply love caring for the ill and wounded, helping them to heal: thus, nursing. Now 32 and a very serious, dedicated, and experienced nurse, I feel strongly that it is my optimal time to excel in graduate school. UXXX is my first choice because I love the diversity of your university and the surrounding area. I have now lived and worked in China, the Philippines, Thailand, Taiwan, Netherlands, Belgium, Spain, France, Switzerland, Italy, Ethiopia, Kenya, Uganda, Rwanda, Burundi, Tanzania, Zanzibar, Mexico, Peru, and Costa Rica; but California will always be my home. As an ethnic-Chinese who speaks intermediate Spanish and seeks to improve on a daily basis, I feel most at home in City, State. My central professional goal now that I am retiring from active duty in the military is to earn my Master's Degree in your program and become a certified Psychiatric Nurse Practitioner working in the private sector with special attention to the issues of the underserved in my community.
